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Incrdibly glad to see you on Newgrounds! As always, your videos are incredibly entertaining. Thank you for makin' em!

CARBONWATER THIS IS REALLY GOOD. Definitely a giant leap for you in every aspect. Great jorb!

Carbonwater responds:

Thanks cool guy! B)

Arguably the best Flash animation on Newgrounds.

First off, I just wanted to say that you're a decent animator. You obviously have a good grasp of how good animation is done.
The thing is, your style is awful. It's incontrovertible that you completely ripped off of PsychicPebbles (and Oney's, to an extent) art style. There is little to no difference between your style and his. You didn't even attempt to make your style differentiatable from Zach's and blatantly stole the use of his squinting-eyed and exposed-gums facial expressions.
Not only did you fail to be original in "your" art style, you completely failed to be original in the overall idea of this animation. In the past year, I've seen so many Pokemon parodies. This is nothing new.
Your lack of originality disgusts me. As an animator, at least attempt to move Newgrounds forward with original ideas instead of sucking on the tits of others.

KREID YOU ARE AN INSNAELY GOOD ANIMATOR.
Seriously, great job on this, man. I need to watch more of your stuff.

Kreid responds:

Thanks dude!

i showed this to my mom an she laughed very epic flash cartoon dude.....

Utentagen responds:

I showed it To my Mom and she Grounded Me... I was like.... FUCK YOU MOM! YOUR Not even a good mom

Pretty good. Worthy of 3 stairs and a half.
The art was a little iffy. In some places, it looked really good, but in others, such as pretty much every drawing of Ash, it didn't look that great. The backgrounds like the bushes / tree in the very beginning were bland. I know it's a cartoon, but each bush-bump looked exactly the same. And the rocks in the wall of the cave's entrance looked odd. You might've been better without them. Not sure why Ash was smiling as he walked into the Zubat cave, either. Ash's shoe as he steps down to trigger the Pokemon battle looked pretty...meh, too.
I will say that the actual Pokemon battle setting looked cool! I HIGHLY recommend that you stray away from hand written looking fonts, though. That's -my- own personal tick. They just don't look good. But hey, if they float your boat, go ahead.
When Ash says "Pikachu, use thunderbolt", that whole little scene looks abd. Ash is too low on the screen and his arm and hand are drawn pretty stiff. It also looks like Ash is naked due to the lack of arm sleeve. Maybe I'm just weird.

Those are just a few things. Overall, the art could use some work. Kinda funny, though. It's definitely relatable (many times have I almost thrown my GameBoy on the ground due to a combination of a Zubat encounters and one last Pokemon with HP in the single digits). You've definitely got loads of potential. YOU CAN GO THE DISTANCE. YOU CAN GO THE WAY.

LitPower responds:

Thank you, I'm glad not everyone is just saying "oh yeah your art could improve" but this comment has helped me a lot and given me a lot to think about for future animations, thanks a lot for the help! :)

Hey, you're a pretty good animator! This was a decent parody, though parodies aren't really -my- personal thing. But even so, I thought it was funny. I laughed at the somersault, actually.
My recommendation is that you DON'T use a kazoo for background music. Try to be original with that, don't just copy Oney's Dragonzball Pee stuff.
But either way, good job on this. 4 stairs.

Zortov responds:

Hey! Thanks I appreciate the criticism. Honestly, I did the kazoo before I knew about Oney's stuff but I do see the similarity. And I also am trying to do my own thing, not just more of what others do, good as it is. I also have ideas for non-parody stuff which I'll try to have up soon.

Woah, I assume you took a bit of inspiration from the Ren and Stimpy episode "A Visit to Anthony" for the character design.
This was a really great short. Great job!

ToonHole responds:

We love Ren and Stimpy!

Pretty good. Story was a bit short, but I guess size doesn't totally matter. Animation could've been better, too, but overall, it was a pretty good improvement over what I last saw from you. You've got a pretty darn good amount of potential. YOU CAN GO THE DISTANCE.

Kombothekid responds:

Thank you! :D We're working on a new episode, (A new years one), and we've got a few lines recorded. YAAAAY!

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